Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Essay #1: Idea Draft


  • Learning English and then relearning Chinese (struggle throughout high school)
  • My mom used to say i was so fluent in Chinese (story when i yelled at 2 boys for playing with my dolls in Chinese)
  • My whole family all speaks english, my mom took a beginners Chinese class before i was adopted
  • Social media vs school language
  • Social media: i use "same" "omg" "lol" "haha" and include a lot of emojis in my text
  • School: I use proper sentence structure with punctuation and smart sounding words when i try to make sentences flow
  • Theme: change and growth: Chinese was my first language, had to learn english when i was 4 (lost Chinese), and all through high school i took Chinese as my language and tried to re learn it

2 comments:

  1. We both come from a pretty equal language past. Are you also a second generation child? You know the sad news is we will most likely have children who will not speak our cultured language because they say 3rd generation never know.

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  2. Hello, Your draft was great! I would just focus on expanding your examples and making connections to the readings; other than that your'e on the right track.

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